Showing posts with label writers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writers. Show all posts

Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Novel Excerpts: Just enough deliciousness to get you salivating...


When I'm waiting for the next book in a series I'm enjoying, I gobble up anything the author throws at me in the interim. Some authors post excerpts of upcoming novels and this is the cruelest and most delicious pain of all. Not only do I get to read a snippet of what's to come, but then I have to wait until it's published to see more.

I have been fielding emails requesting that I post a piece of yums from Book Four, ANOMALY: Beyond the Rabbit. Today, I did just that. I picked a couple of chapters at the beginning so readers will immediately recognize the action. Have a look, but note this one has spoilers if you haven't read Book Three, Rabbit Redemption. Rabbit fans have followed Elders Canaan and Kilmeade through all sorts of hell to get to Book Four, so that is why they have hopped out of the Trilogy. Their storyline must be resolved as well and ANOMALY is finished and has been sent to editing.

The final book in the Rabbit Saga is entitled CONUNDRUM: The Lost Rabbit and is being written now. I assure you, the adventure only becomes more enjoyable with each new page and each new book!

I better get back to writing. Elder Canaan is calling...


Thursday, November 30, 2017

WRITERS, ARE YOU BOUND UP? 3 Tips to untie your hands when writer's block hits you in the nether regions.

photo courtesy kwon-ji-young-2525592_340-free-pixabay

1.    STOP THINKING AND WRITE   A tale has been conceived inside of you and now it yearns to break into our world. A writer simply can’t not write. I can’t not write. Yes, you read that correctly. This is how we know not everyone is a writer—the ones who wish they could write and never do, the ones who would like to write and never do—these aren’t writers. Writers write. If we don’t, we grow ill, either in spirit or body or both. Sound melodramatic? That’s an artist for you. Get in touch with the artist inside YOU and let him or her out to play. You put pen to paper (or typed a sentence), now STOP THINKING ABOUT STUFF THAT WILL SLOW YOU DOWN and just write. All the stuff you learned at the writer’s conference is for your edification, but when getting your story down initially, don’t stress over all the rules of engagement. The time to worry over that stuff is when you reached the end of your writing project.



2.    STOP PROOFING   Correcting mistakes as you go along is normal, but trying to EDIT before your book is written can distract you, discourage you, and cause you to quit. If you want to write a story about the “brwn doge with tha whyte tail,” WRITE IT DOWN, all the way to the end, when the doggie finally figures out how to catch that waggly tail, and THEN go back and edit, make corrections to grammar, punctuation, syntax, etc.



3.    SHARE ONLY WITH POSITIVE FOLKS   Here’s something that kills a lot of books still in the writer’s womb: negative feedback. Look back at number one and add this—if you have the desire to write, then you’re a writer. Don’t doubt it, it’s a fact of nature. If you’re surrounded by negative people when you write, and they are your superiors (parents, etc.), you either must write on the sly or nurse your creative spirit another way until you can break free of their constricting presence. Otherwise, if in a neutral or positive environment, in the beginning stages of your project, share only with people who will build you up. It’s okay if they want to help and offer constructive criticism, but BE ON GUARD—the second they say something that makes you want to quit, go back and read #1 and stop sharing your work with that person. There is a time for negative feedback (constructive criticism) and for new writers, NEVER is that time before the project has been written down.



So go and do. From one writer to another, I command thee.

Ellen C. Maze Sallas, The Author’s Mentor


Sunday, October 8, 2017

FICTION WRITERS- Getting help with a foreign character's DIALOGUE "De nada"




RABBIT FANS remember the Australian character, Rakum Cow Stuart Loudon, from Rabbit Legacy. He runs into Canaan at a Rest Area one night when Canaan needs a "buzz." In the upcoming third installment (Rabbit Redemption, Little Roni Publishers Jan 2018), he has a much larger role. Because of this, I needed help with his dialogue. I'm not Australian so my scope of Aussie dialect and language comes from Hollywood. 

HERE'S MY SOLUTION. The following is a helpful blog on what to do when your character isn't you!

DIALOGUE HELP: So what if your character is Australian and you're not? When I write fiction, my characters come as they are--I don't choose them, they arrive already formed. That means they aren't all White, Female, American, Christian, Southern Belles (touché). Thanks to social media, nearly every writer has friends around the country who they can ask for help to make sure their character sounds real and not "Hollywood."

Recently, I asked my friend and fellow author Stu Loudon for help bringing my Aussie character's dialogue to life. I know all about my character's personality, but not how he might say certain things. I asked Stu to help and he said YES.

IF YOU GET HELP, go through your novel and select portions where you need the friend to help out. Don't send the whole novel, or even the entire chapter--this will greatly slow down the response time. Send only what the friend needs above and beyond the dialogue to add his or her special native touch. Then, you should highlight the dialogue so your friend can go right to it easily. Keep in mind, no matter how much a friend or fan likes your work, he or she is busy 24/7 just like you are! Lastly, offer to pay them enough for a nice dinner. Trust me, there are a dozen good reasons to give a little monetary thank you for this help.

USING THE INTERNET: Sometimes you have to use the internet for this help. I googled "Aussie slang" in case my friend was too busy to help and dozens of sites came up. Of course, I would have bungled the job -- Americans wouldn't notice, but anyone who ever knew a true Australian would know I used the internet to make my character speak!

FINAL NOTE ABOUT GOOGLE TRANSLATE: Sometimes, your character speaks another language, or uses foreign phrases in his daily speech. For example, I have several Latino characters who may exclaim*, "Madre de dios!" or "Meirda!", or my German character may say, "jah," etc. etc. We all use Google Translate to make short sentences for our books. That is my advice--use it only for short items. It is not perfect, and if you know anyone who speaks that language, ask them to check it.

RABBIT TRILOGY
Author Beth Rider writes a vampire novel that angers a race of "real" vampires living under the radar since before Christ. Learn more at www.ellencmaze.com.

*Use proper punctuation, too. This blog doesn't support upside-down exclamation points. :)


Sunday, August 18, 2013

They invited me to do WHAT? Writers Teaching Writers the Right Way

"They invited me to do WHAT?"

Being that my first novel rode the #1 Top-Rated spot on Customer ratings for Amazon.com for 16 weeks, and after making myself available as a mentor for any writer worldwide with a question, I've been welcomed into teaching keys of good writing and aspects of traditional and self-publishing all over the South. Most recently, Boot Camp for Christian Writers invited me to teach two seminars on Fiction/Character and Plot Development. The first was in April this year and the crowd seemed genuinely edified by my 2 1/2 hour interactive presentation. For the second one, the organizers asked me if I could put my teaching into a workbook to hand out at the October Boot Camp. Wow. I've done this already with my previous two popular seminars, You CAN Self-Publish and You CAN Self-Promote, both of which grew out of my power point presentations at writer's conferences. Both workbooks can be given to participants and can also be sold via Amazon.com to writers all over the globe. So couldn't I do the same thing with my Fiction seminar?

Well, maybe. If I have the time.

So that is what I am up to the next few weeks, mixed in with my eleven hundred other projects, I shall try to collect all of my seminar data into a comprehensive workbook for the Boot Campers and the world.

Wish me luck, and I shall wish you a wonderful week!

HUGS and blessings,
Ellen

Ellen's WIPS (works in progress)
  1. RABBIT REDEMPTION (Book 3 of Rabbit Trilogy)
  2. TREE OF LIFE (Book 3 of the Corescu Chronicles)
  3. THE INDWELLING OF TORI BLESSING (stand alone paranormal novel)
  4. YOU CAN WRITE GOOD FICTION, MAKE YOUR PLOT RESONATE AND YOUR CHARACTERS BREATHE
GOD BLESS YOU'SE!!
Ellen C. Maze married June 14, 2013!! My books will remain under Ellen C. Maze, but I am now ELLEN SALLAS and loving every minute of it!!