Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, November 30, 2017

WRITERS, ARE YOU BOUND UP? 3 Tips to untie your hands when writer's block hits you in the nether regions.

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1.    STOP THINKING AND WRITE   A tale has been conceived inside of you and now it yearns to break into our world. A writer simply can’t not write. I can’t not write. Yes, you read that correctly. This is how we know not everyone is a writer—the ones who wish they could write and never do, the ones who would like to write and never do—these aren’t writers. Writers write. If we don’t, we grow ill, either in spirit or body or both. Sound melodramatic? That’s an artist for you. Get in touch with the artist inside YOU and let him or her out to play. You put pen to paper (or typed a sentence), now STOP THINKING ABOUT STUFF THAT WILL SLOW YOU DOWN and just write. All the stuff you learned at the writer’s conference is for your edification, but when getting your story down initially, don’t stress over all the rules of engagement. The time to worry over that stuff is when you reached the end of your writing project.



2.    STOP PROOFING   Correcting mistakes as you go along is normal, but trying to EDIT before your book is written can distract you, discourage you, and cause you to quit. If you want to write a story about the “brwn doge with tha whyte tail,” WRITE IT DOWN, all the way to the end, when the doggie finally figures out how to catch that waggly tail, and THEN go back and edit, make corrections to grammar, punctuation, syntax, etc.



3.    SHARE ONLY WITH POSITIVE FOLKS   Here’s something that kills a lot of books still in the writer’s womb: negative feedback. Look back at number one and add this—if you have the desire to write, then you’re a writer. Don’t doubt it, it’s a fact of nature. If you’re surrounded by negative people when you write, and they are your superiors (parents, etc.), you either must write on the sly or nurse your creative spirit another way until you can break free of their constricting presence. Otherwise, if in a neutral or positive environment, in the beginning stages of your project, share only with people who will build you up. It’s okay if they want to help and offer constructive criticism, but BE ON GUARD—the second they say something that makes you want to quit, go back and read #1 and stop sharing your work with that person. There is a time for negative feedback (constructive criticism) and for new writers, NEVER is that time before the project has been written down.



So go and do. From one writer to another, I command thee.

Ellen C. Maze Sallas, The Author’s Mentor


Friday, September 15, 2017

RABBIT REDEMPTION Book Three is off to the editors ~ Let's talk gender and ethinicity of characters, Blog Post #2







NOW... The baby you conceived in your spirit landed on paper and is off at school being check by professionals who search forensically for errors you overlooked while locked in the joys of parenthood... Ahh, the novelist's life!

THIS IS A FUN EXERCISE for you to do with your novel. This exercise will enable you to grow closer to each character and gather skills that will pop up later when asked questions about them in interviews. Let's go.

Rabbit Redemption, Book Three of the Rabbit Trilogy is the baby and today I want to share some little things about character gender and race (ethnicity).

Writers know that your book actually writes itself, that the characters are alive and well in another dimension and they break through to enlist your help in making them alive in our world. Non-writers, though, wonder why we cast a woman in that role, or why does the hero have to be white (or black), or who decided the Hispanic man would be the killer? Etc. Etc. While it's true movie makers will often change the race and/or ethnicity of a character for the film version of a book, when the author wrote it, he or she had no choice, the author MUST write the character true, or the book won't work. If the author attempts to force a character into another race or gender, it will rebel so badly, writer's block develops. It's true!

RABBIT REDEMPTION has more male characters than female, but that's because in Books One and Two, the female lead and her female counterparts accomplished their task and do not appear here. For this post, I will stick to the characters for this book. Some of the characters are supernatural, but they have an appearance of being human, and in my novel world, they retain some of their ethnic culture and blend it with their paranormal traits.

For this post: RAKUM (the name of the long-lived race of blood drinkers/vampires)

MAIN CHARACTERS, I will group them in ethnicity and role (two females, F):

Canaan ~ Caucasian male, hero
Javier ~ Caucasian, hero
Kilmeade ~ Caucasian, hero
Chloe ~ Caucasian, supporting character (F)
Marcy ~ Caucasian, supporting character (F)
Stuart ~ Caucasian, minion
Isaac ~ Caucasian, villain

Boris ~ Black, minion 
Kite ~ Black, minion
Polly ~ Black, minion & anti-hero

Guap ~ Hispanic, minion & anti-hero
Rafael ~ Hispanic, anti-hero
Santiago ~ Hispanic, supporting character

Isn't that fun! I literally spent MONTHS on my novel and have read it more than fifty times, and never realized some of the statistics we see here. 

FIRST: I am Caucasian, so when I write I think white. That's a fact. My African-American writer friend and psychologist Dr. Jan Lightfoot and I have discussed this, how you write in your own ethnicity. That's not to say you can't write legitimate and REAL other-raced characters, but your brain starts out in your own familiarity.

SECOND: My Black and Hispanic characters were born into this world with sentience -- I didn't PLAN them. That is the amazing thing: writers know this! I just started typing and Rafael was born. He had Iago in his arms and Santiago came into our world. It's a BREAKING THROUGH that happens when you write.

THIRD: I didn't cause my characters to be good guys or bad guys. Like their race, they were born into this world as they are. Isaac is a devil -- literally -- and he is white. His very favorite minion is Black. Who knows why?

Anyway, go and list your characters and comment back with what you find! Next post will be about POV -- so many fun things we can do while our novels are off at the editors' house!

KEEP WRITING
Ellen C Maze (Sallas)

Evil Incarnate...
His favorite minion... Go figure?






Saturday, November 28, 2009

QUIRKY but it WORKS: writing the sequel

these photos are copyrighted by their individual owners and not for sale All writers have their quirky methods. I wonder if mine is any quirkier than anyone else’s? Nevertheless… It’s time. Time to collect faces for my new novel. Rabbit Legacy (the sequel to the terrific new novel RABBIT: CHASING BETH RIDER) will have several returning characters, plus a few new ones to fill out the plot. I use photos gleaned from the web to look at while I write; and the eyes have it. When I am writing a scene, I will glance at the character’s face and then they truly come alive for me. I can be moved to tears just by imagining my novel’s circumstances forced upon the poor character on the cast page. As you can see, these are some nice faces. New to the cast is... Selene Cherrie – RABBIT: CHASING BETH RIDER Chapter 47..... Mina Bushman – romances David Walker..... Canaan – a Rakum (the name of the vampire race in this novel series), a powerful Elder. Not mentioned in the 1st book, but mentioned in the Loose Rabbits (chapters not in the novel, but posted on the website—link )..... Marcy Haddle – not mentioned in the 1st Book; Canaan’s mate of choice..... Damien – Not mentioned in the 1st book, but mentioned in the Loose Rabbits; was a powerful Rakum Father, now human..... Theophilus – a Rakum Father in the 1st Book, under duress in the 2nd..... There are others that are not pictured… I am saving the bad guys for later. I am not into spoiling the novel for you this soon!..... Go pick up a copy of Rabbit: Chasing Beth Rider today anywhere you buy books, or buy a signed copy on the website, http://www.rabbitnovel.com/, and see what the BUZZZ is all about!

Tuesday, June 30, 2009

THE JUDGING preparing for the Writer's Conference 7/17/09

So on July 17th and 18th, I will be headed to Athens, Ga for the 16th Harriette Austin Writer's Conference. I am very excited. I will be taking workshops under MAYA ROCK, JUDITH GEARY, TODD SENTELL, and BEVERLY VARNADO. My manuscript for THE JUDGING will be evaluated by Katie Sulkowski who is from a primarily Christian Agency. So what are my steps now? This is my first writers conference for adult fiction. I attended a one-day conference for Children's Illustrators and Writers in 2004 and this will be a lot different. I am flying by the seat of my pants, besides chatting with some other authors online now, plus the admin for the conference. So here is what I will take with me, so far: 1. business/calling cards 2. spiral-bound copy of THE JUDGING in the latest edit 3. a packet with THE JUDGING synopsis, long and short, and 15 pages double-spaced (as if someone might ask to see it or take it with them. Or to share with an another attendee that I meet there. 4. a new spiral bound notebook to take notes in 5. a print out of all my books and their short synopses, or their hooks. I'm sure I'll think of some more things along the way. Right now I have to call the motel and add another day. Somehow I accidentally got us down for one night when I need two. This is my first ever blog for a novel series that will surely knock the socks off the reading community--Christian and Mainstream... pray for me